Wednesday 13 November 2019

Motivated to write



Writing is not our favourite activity in class.  Imagine if a student who hated writing or doing the e-AsTTle assessment in class at the beginning of the year,  transformed into the best writer in the class at the end of the year - wont that be nice?  Watch our movie and see how this transformation happened!

50 comments:

  1. Hi my name is vika from pt england school I loved your movie and music I really really laughed at the start. I loved what he did at the end it was so nice.

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  2. talofa that movie is so cool. My favourite part is when he got that shot in and when the principle came out he saw the boy and it said wasted i was so laughing.

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  3. hi my name is aniqua your movie was funny i like it a lot

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  4. hi room 11. my name is Naomi i really liked how you guys did the wasted then it was so funny i really loved your movie.

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  5. Duh duh duh, Kia Ora My name Is Monika I am a year 8 in room 3 at Pt England school. I really loved the beginning of the video and I really enjoyed the movie. That was nice of Honor to calm down a bit and win a few awards at the end of the term.

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  6. Malo e lelei room 11 my name is Elizah I'm from Pt England school. I liked your movie because how you guys edit your guys movie to be a little funny so that people likes your movie. It's great and awesome and keep up the good acting.

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  7. Kia Ora Room 11!
    My name is Trendy and I am a student who attends Pt England School. I died before I got to watch the whole thing, your little introduction was hilarious. It was something new and different. I loved how you made this movie about encouraging others to improve their skills in any subject.

    These days we all need to persuade people to do things. If you ever see someone who needs help in any situation, please make sure to help them out because who all need to be good citizens and help out. I hope you guys learnt something new about this movie!
    Stay Strong!
    ~ Trendy ~

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  8. kia ora Room 11. I like that part when honor got the basketball in the hoop. when I got to glen Innes school I didn't know how to write but I got better. How did you feel when the principal said that your teacher didn't think your writing wasn't bad?

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  9. Malo e lelei room eleven, I love what you students and teachers have done in your film, room ten even did a film too and it is amazing. How do you come up with the ideas?

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  10. Kia ora room 11. I like the way you done your video and how honnor did the right thing now and how he is now writing and his writing is now in the office. Thanks for sharing this movie with us.

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  11. kia ora Room 11
    the funniest thing that I have ever seen was when the first bit came on but you did a awesome job in your work you keep your good work up and I am Jessie from Glen Innes Primary School.

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  12. this looks awesome room 11 I really enjoyed that time when honnor got the ball in the hoop I hope you make more movies :)

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  13. isiah that movie is so cool. My favourite part is when he got that shot in and when the principle came out he saw the boy and it said wasted i was so laughing.

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  14. Kia ora room 11.i like the part when.honor said to the teacher.i like math better

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  15. Malo e lelei my name is Osa and I am from point england school and I like your movie and the start is very funny and it is amazing.

    from Osa

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  16. Hi my name is Mel and i go to point england school and I like the first part when he gets in trouble that part was funny and when you got the 3 pointer in that was cool

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  17. when he got that shot in the hoop he was so proud. Love your movie it is so talent. when the principle came i was like shame you busted boy. nice to see your movie by pt England school at the block.

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  19. Bonjour my name is Leata From Pt England School.
    Your movie was so fantastic. I love your movie because it was so kind. How do you make the boy angry?
    Thank you for showing your movies.

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  20. Kia ora Room 11 my name is Lawren At Glen Innes School. The start of your film was humorous. Honor persevered and kept on trying to write. He never gave up. It was very clever.

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  21. Hello i am from pt England school the beginning of the movie made me giggle
    and it made me laugh. From The Block

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  22. Kia Ora Room 11,
    My name is Angel I go to Pt England School.I like the first part when he gets in trouble that part was funny and when you got the 3 pointer in that was cool.Your movie was so fantastic. Keep you the good work
    From Angel

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  23. Talofa lava and greetings to you all my name is Josh and i attend pt england school and i like your movie lots also your movie is very funny and inspiring to me my favourite part is the start and also keep up all the hard work and your movie is amazing.

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  24. Hi my name is Selesa and I thing you try best at working from selesa in the block.

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    1. Selesa i think you mest up with you're spelling

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  25. Hello room 11 you have a crack up movie I think your the best movie I've seen my favourite part was the starting good vines from The Block

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  26. hello my name is Elijah and my favorite part was when the boy banged his head against the door from
    Elijah from pt england

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  27. kia ora my name is jennifer I really liked your movie it's so funny.

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  28. Hello room 11 my name is sau and I am from GI school. That was a great movies because the edits were funny. I like math but I like writing more. How did you inspire students writing.

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  29. Hello room 11.
    I like the part when Honor got the 3 pointer in. Keep up the good work Honor.

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  30. Churry thank you for supporting me bless you guyz.

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  31. HI room 11 ,
    Hi my name is Sione and I attend St Pius X school.I didn't really understand what your movie was about.Besides that keep up the good work.


    Best wishes.

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  32. Hi, my name is Ryan. I liked the part where you did the 3 pointer. Keep up the good work Honor. How did you get the 3 pointer in?

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  33. true,room 11 my name is tony and i liked you're movie. you are a good acting boy. i like your movie.

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  34. kia ora my name is sapphire I really liked your movie it's so funny.

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  35. Malo e lelei Room 11, this is Eva from Glen Innes School. I like how you were editing the video in the first part because it was very funny. You did a good job of editing the video and I like it so much that I want you to make a prat 2 because the video was so funny. The video was so funny that my whole class is making a comment on your blog. Does Honor likes Maths or Writing? Was it fun making the video? Was it cool editing the video?

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  36. Fakalofa lahi atu my name is Cassia and I am a year 4 at Glen Innes School and when I watch your video it was so superb and I liked the bit when Honour got the ball in the hoop and then the music started playing.

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  37. Kia ora my name is Mokoia I go to glen innes school. I loved your video because you didn’t like doing reading then went to play basketball but then the principal told you to go to his office. Then you talked to him then you went back to your class and then you liked writing.

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  38. Kia ora,room 11 My name is Adhitya I liked your movie and my fovorite part was the honor throwing basketball into the hoop.
    By: Adhitya
    Room: 8

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  39. hi room 11 my name is kasaline and i go to pt england school i really enjoyed watching your movie keep up the great work

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  40. Malo e lelei, Room 11 I like your movie because it is how a boy loved math and than writing. I think I have seen a movie like this before. Have you made a movie about something funny?

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  41. Malo e lelei, room 11. I am Hevaha from Glen Innes School. I love your movie because, I also love doing writing at school and everywhere. I also like maths too. Do you love reading ?

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  42. KIA Ora room 11 Well done for this awesome movie I like how he liked math at the start and then you like writing and great job for winning an writing award.

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  43. Malo e lelei my name is Osa I go pt england school and I am a year six I like the way Honor changed and finished his work properly and great job for winning a writing award keep up the good.

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  44. Kia ora room 11 my name is makea I really enjoyed wacthing your movie well done for this awesome job hope yous do more movie and it was so cool work hard room 11.

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  45. Hi Room 11 I really like this movie a lot its the best movie have ever seen in my hole life. Thank you Mr Naidoo for posting this movie

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  46. Hi room 11.It's Kaltee from room 10.
    I liked how he troyed and never gave up

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  47. Hi Room 11 this is Nevaya from Room 9 I Really Enjoyed watching your
    Movie. I thought it was so interesting

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  48. when he love math now he like writing but sometimes your hand can hurt my one hurts sometimes but sometimes it don'ts.

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  49. i like how he got the ball in the hoop but i sometimes get the bll in the hoop too.

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